Looking for peer review of an FSM tutorial

Edit: I guess I made the requirements to stringent as I got no volunteers! For the sake of getting some new eyes on this document prior to its first release, I am open to any and all volunteers. Just use the PM button to send me a private note with an email address I can send the document to.

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Looking for a few knowledgeable people to peer review a tutorial on finite state machines as they relate to the Arduino. Please PM me with a SHORT bio (“10+ years embedded sw” is enough) and an email I can use to send you the Word document.

If you don’t have a good working knowledge of an FSM, please refrain.